Wow
When i listen to this, i realise that i have still a lot to learn. Listening to this song is just a motivation for me to keep making music.
Great work and keep it up!
5/5
10/10
MH16
Wow
When i listen to this, i realise that i have still a lot to learn. Listening to this song is just a motivation for me to keep making music.
Great work and keep it up!
5/5
10/10
MH16
Thanks man, and I'm glad that this motivated you to keep working hard! Imma check out more of your stuff when I get the chance.
3rd good review
Wow.
The last song i heard from you was pretty good, but this one... this is just outstanding!
From the 1st to the last second this song was enjoyable. I loved the stop at 1:55!
Great job!
But i'd also like to say, that you can see the dissapointing side of Newgrounds here.
So much good songs go to waste on NG and that's really a shame. This is yet another example of that.
Keep doing the great work and i'll hope that someday you'll be a well-known artist on NG and maybe even beyond NG.
5/5, 10/10
MH16
thanks for the new title
Well
I agree with darthmarus on the guitar. I think the guitar is too soft and smooth.
Apart from the guitar, everything is great, except that it needs some bass.
And if you really don't know what to do with this song, just leave it for what it is and try to make it better after a couple of months.
Hope i helped.
MH16 (The guy from a song you reviewed :P )
You thinks? Ok well thanks i will fix my guitar problem and leave it, and come back and work on it laters! Yeah, i need a bass.
Lol
Thanks for the review!!
Xeon
:-(
No offense, but if somebody gave this song to me for Christmas, i would cry all day long.
It sounds like an alarm, with laser zaps and very poor percussion.
Please put more effort, melody and rythm in your music, because this just sounds like crap. I mean, there's only 1 note per instrument!
0/5
1/10
MH16
"No offense, but if somebody gave this song to me for Christmas, i would cry all day long." O.K. if you would cry all day long if some1 gave this to you then you would be crying all day long at me. So I think you are lying unless you can show me a video on youtube as proof.!
And also you shouldn't disrespect other peoples gifts to you Fag.
Hey
This song ain't so bad, but it needs a melody.
Did you make this in FL? Can i remix it? I can make a good melody :-)
MH16
Go For It! yes I made it in FL. I sent you a PM!
Pretty good work
This is pretty well made and if you've chosen better guitar sounds you had a 10.
Also, it gets a bit repetitive and the sounds are a bit too loud sometimes.
Keep it up!
9/10
4/5
MH16
*nods* Ok .thanks for the suggestions and the review :)
WOW
This is 1 of the 2 songs that are in my favourites.
I can't say anything else than: Great job!
5/5
10/10
MH16
PS, could you check out my song too?:P
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/196503
Thanks =)
Great song, I left you a review :)
Nice!
I liked the part at 1:23 with the strings :-)
And i like the title too.
5/5
10/10
MH16
PS, could you check my submission too? :P
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/196503
Hey! your Helth's friend. Are you thing 1 or thing 2? And yes I will review your song, I'll be right there.
I see you..
Age 32, Male
I'm right here.
Joined on 9/25/08