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[United States of America]

Good

This is very good. You would have got 10 stars if it had a bit more. It sounds like it's missing something.
Keep it up!
9/10
4/5

MH16

BlinkMarine responds:

Thanks, i just got back on the pc and some one voted it like 2 or something... i know it's not perfect but i thought that was pretty harsh..
Yep it is missing something... I'm actually working on a full length version right now.

[whatever =l]

The drums :-(

This would have been a pretty good song, if the drums weren't out of rythm.
Listen at 0:42, the drums and the guitar aren't co-operating there. And that's just 1 example of it.
I'll give you 7/10 and a 4/5.
The drums just screw it all.

MH16

[ETnX - Crosswire v2]

Well...

It's way too repetitive.
There are only 4 notes that are played through the whole song.
A song needs a good melody and this song doesn't have one.
Don't think i'm trying to piss you off, but see this as constructive criticism.
btw, you just received my 100th review :P
Don't give up music making!
4/5
8/10
MH16

Viper251 responds:

Yeah, but I don't have a midi keyboard or nothing. I don't really know how to make a good melody - I just hope for the best. Any advice would be helpful.

[[V] - Furial]

Cool!

This doesn't deserve a 3.25, so i'll try to boost the rating a bit.
I can't really think of things that could make this song better, i think it's really good now.
And a name... hmmm... how about: ''Angry Peanuts''? No no, just kidding :P
I think ''Timeless'' or ''Discover'' are nice titles for this.
10/10
5/5
MH16

Marks-a-lot responds:

hmm I like Timeless...I am probably going to go with that. Thanks for the review

[Syphonmax 2009]

Very long intro

I think the intro was too long.
After the intro it sounds pretty nice, but a bit too repetitive.
4/5
9/10

MH16

syphonmax responds:

thanks

[New Years Party]

Pretty good!

But it just needs more things. I don't know what exactly, but it doesn't sound complete.
Other than that, good job!
9/10
5/5

MH16

syphonmax responds:

Thanks ^_^

[Hard Trance Song Demo]

Pretty good

But i agree with Black-BaMb0o that there isn't very much variation. You should definatly keep that synth that comes in at 1:10.
That break at 2:05 is very nice too.
I don't really know what else too say :P
Good job and i hope that the final version of this song is going to have my 10/10 and 5/5.
I won't vote for this one, because it's not finished yet.
Let me know when the final version is online! :-)

MH16

DjXeon responds:

Well i was always gonna keep the synth at 1:10, i think that through the whole song its kindov the only thing original :S.
But thatnks for the review, and i will let you know when ive updated it!
Xeon

[Run Shit Down!!!!!! (full)]

Wow

When i listen to this, i realise that i have still a lot to learn. Listening to this song is just a motivation for me to keep making music.
Great work and keep it up!
5/5
10/10

MH16

blackattackbitch responds:

Thanks man, and I'm glad that this motivated you to keep working hard! Imma check out more of your stuff when I get the chance.

[[V] - Timeless]

3rd good review

Wow.
The last song i heard from you was pretty good, but this one... this is just outstanding!
From the 1st to the last second this song was enjoyable. I loved the stop at 1:55!
Great job!

But i'd also like to say, that you can see the dissapointing side of Newgrounds here.
So much good songs go to waste on NG and that's really a shame. This is yet another example of that.

Keep doing the great work and i'll hope that someday you'll be a well-known artist on NG and maybe even beyond NG.
5/5, 10/10

MH16

Marks-a-lot responds:

thanks for the new title

[Solo WIP]

Well

I agree with darthmarus on the guitar. I think the guitar is too soft and smooth.
Apart from the guitar, everything is great, except that it needs some bass.
And if you really don't know what to do with this song, just leave it for what it is and try to make it better after a couple of months.
Hope i helped.

MH16 (The guy from a song you reviewed :P )

DjXeon responds:

You thinks? Ok well thanks i will fix my guitar problem and leave it, and come back and work on it laters! Yeah, i need a bass.
Lol
Thanks for the review!!
Xeon