Impressive
If i compare my best song with this, my best song looks worthless.
It's a bit short, but incredibly well made. Seriously!
Keep making great songs like this.
You're going to be my first favourite artist, just because of this song :P
10/10
5/5
MH16
wow - thanks alot
your best song is amazing - in fact I don't know your best song cause there are so many good ones!
I really look up to you - you know?
One of the first people i heard on the audio portal xD
I seem to see your name like everywhere - guess it's just one of those names :)
Anyways - well made! thanks alot
(listen to ikou ze ni by intero) it's much better
thankyou again
Good
This is very good. You would have got 10 stars if it had a bit more. It sounds like it's missing something.
Keep it up!
9/10
4/5
MH16
Thanks, i just got back on the pc and some one voted it like 2 or something... i know it's not perfect but i thought that was pretty harsh..
Yep it is missing something... I'm actually working on a full length version right now.
The drums :-(
This would have been a pretty good song, if the drums weren't out of rythm.
Listen at 0:42, the drums and the guitar aren't co-operating there. And that's just 1 example of it.
I'll give you 7/10 and a 4/5.
The drums just screw it all.
MH16
Well...
It's way too repetitive.
There are only 4 notes that are played through the whole song.
A song needs a good melody and this song doesn't have one.
Don't think i'm trying to piss you off, but see this as constructive criticism.
btw, you just received my 100th review :P
Don't give up music making!
4/5
8/10
MH16
Yeah, but I don't have a midi keyboard or nothing. I don't really know how to make a good melody - I just hope for the best. Any advice would be helpful.
Cool!
This doesn't deserve a 3.25, so i'll try to boost the rating a bit.
I can't really think of things that could make this song better, i think it's really good now.
And a name... hmmm... how about: ''Angry Peanuts''? No no, just kidding :P
I think ''Timeless'' or ''Discover'' are nice titles for this.
10/10
5/5
MH16
hmm I like Timeless...I am probably going to go with that. Thanks for the review
Pretty good
But i agree with Black-BaMb0o that there isn't very much variation. You should definatly keep that synth that comes in at 1:10.
That break at 2:05 is very nice too.
I don't really know what else too say :P
Good job and i hope that the final version of this song is going to have my 10/10 and 5/5.
I won't vote for this one, because it's not finished yet.
Let me know when the final version is online! :-)
MH16
Well i was always gonna keep the synth at 1:10, i think that through the whole song its kindov the only thing original :S.
But thatnks for the review, and i will let you know when ive updated it!
Xeon
Wow
When i listen to this, i realise that i have still a lot to learn. Listening to this song is just a motivation for me to keep making music.
Great work and keep it up!
5/5
10/10
MH16
Thanks man, and I'm glad that this motivated you to keep working hard! Imma check out more of your stuff when I get the chance.
3rd good review
Wow.
The last song i heard from you was pretty good, but this one... this is just outstanding!
From the 1st to the last second this song was enjoyable. I loved the stop at 1:55!
Great job!
But i'd also like to say, that you can see the dissapointing side of Newgrounds here.
So much good songs go to waste on NG and that's really a shame. This is yet another example of that.
Keep doing the great work and i'll hope that someday you'll be a well-known artist on NG and maybe even beyond NG.
5/5, 10/10
MH16
thanks for the new title
Well
I agree with darthmarus on the guitar. I think the guitar is too soft and smooth.
Apart from the guitar, everything is great, except that it needs some bass.
And if you really don't know what to do with this song, just leave it for what it is and try to make it better after a couple of months.
Hope i helped.
MH16 (The guy from a song you reviewed :P )
You thinks? Ok well thanks i will fix my guitar problem and leave it, and come back and work on it laters! Yeah, i need a bass.
Lol
Thanks for the review!!
Xeon
I like this :-)
It has a really nice intro with strings and then the drums and violin(?) is added.
That sounds great!
Then the song continues and it doesn't get boring to listen to.
The only thing is that you could put a little more variaty in the melodies.
Overall: 5/5 10/10
Great job!
MH16
PS: Could you check my song ''The Power Of War''?
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/198220 <---- without the spaces
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