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[Camilla [Syphonmax Remix]]

This sounds great!

Man, i love that melody!
Well, maybe it's not yours, BUT I STILL LOVE IT! <3
And your right, it's a great buildup. And a great song too!
The only thing that bothers me is the outro. It just fades away and i'm not really a fan of that.
But that's just personal taste though.
Overall:
10/10
5/5
MH16

syphonmax responds:

I really had no idea how to end this song I spent a long time on trying to find an ending and it ended up being more than 5 mins long lol

And thanks =]

[~|Walking In The Rain [Clas.]]

I like those drums!

Wow, i really that beat. It's mellow, but it's also keeping the pace in the song which makes it very pleasant to listen too.
It's a shame that it is so short, but i enjoyed it anyway ^^
Hmm, maybe it's a good thing too that it is so short, otherwise it would be a bit repetitive, so i think it's better this way.
What i do miss though is a 2nd melody that fills up the empty spaces a bit. But screw that, it's very nice to listen too, so you get a
10/10
5/5
MH16

Helth responds:

haha thanks alot man.. maybe we make this longer, depends on the public.. the most like it so far :D

thanks again

Helth & Benesh

[Poison Sand]

Different

This is really different from the music that i normally hear on the AP.
You used really interesting sounds and for some reason it just keeps my attention. It just keeps me wondering what will happen next.

The picture this creates in my head is a city.
Not a normal city though, a really industrial city with a lot of grey and dark colors.
Also, this isn't a normal city. It's completely run by machines and it looks like it's totally forgotten, because it's completely abandoned.

Great job on this interesting, original and even a bit scary song.
10/10
5/5
MH16

[::Moving Trees::]

And another beautiful song

What i really like about your songs is that they're played live. This means that there isn't always perfect timing, but it adds so much emotion and feeling.
Hmmm, this song really makes me sit down and just listen. Yep, this song really got my attention ^^
Anyway, i'll try to write down the picture i see when listening to this song.

A man sits on the beach. He's watching the sea.
It's pretty busy on the beach, but he doesn't notice.
A tear falls down his face and then he sees that a little kid is walking towards him. The kid sits down next to him, but doesn't say a word.
They both look out over the sea.
Suddenly the kid speaks: ''Isn't the sea wonderful?''
''Yes it is'' the man responds.
They watch the sun slowly getting swallowed by the sea.
When the sun is gone completely the kid stands up and walks away. The man stays sitting there, because he has no home, no family and no friends.
Slowly he falls asleep.

10/10
5/5
MH16

gOrc responds:

nice picture I must say. your story fits well in the character of the piece, cause I wanted to catch a sensible athmosphere, too. thanks for taking the time man, these stories always make me happy.

[View - Breathless]

Nice!

I don't really like progressive trance, but you did a great job!
10/10
5/5
MH16

[SMW castle remix]

Cool

This song definaltly fits in a boss fight.
It's full of energy and the bass sounds badass :-)
Nice job on this one.
Of the 4 songs that i heard from you, i think that the Dire Docks song is your best.
But what i'd really like to see is that you create an original song. But if you just want to create remixes it's fine too ;-)
9/10
5/5
MH16

[SM64 dire docks meadow remix]

Nice

Finally a song i DO know :P
I must say that you did a really good job recreating the mood of the song. I can just see myself swimming with Mario again ^^
Great job!
10/10
5/5
MH16

[NSMB bowser castle remix]

Coooool :-)

I really like this song. Well, i can't really think of anything else to say :P
9/10
5/5
MH16

darthmarus responds:

well, thanks anyway....

[M&L bowser's castle remix]

Pretty cool

This song is pretty cool. I don't know the original song though.
What i don't really like is that the crash is hit so many times. I can't really think of any other things that could be better.
Nice job on this one!
8/10
5/5
MH16

darthmarus responds:

yeah, it's a pretty obscure castle theme, which i think is a shame because it is one of my favorites. thanks for reveiwing!

[Last Promise (Kinen Menu)]

Beautiful

Hmm, the strings and the piano compliment eachother perfectly and this entire song is in perfect balance. Nothing is too loud and nothing is too quiet. Nothing is too low and nothing is too high. Nothing could be better in this song.
In this song i can feel sadness, but also hope.
Now i'm going to listen for the 3rd time and i'll try write down some of the things that i imagine while listening to the song.
00:00-00:12
A man is sleeping in a bed. He's is slowly waking up and the image is zooming out. Now you can see that he is in a prison.
00:13-00:28
The man stands up and walks to the bars. After a short moment he walks to his bed again and he sits down.
00:29-00:38
He starts to wonder how things were, when he was still a free man. He wonders how things were, before the judges said he was guilty. If he could only prove he was innocent...
00:39-01:03
A flashback begins.
He's seeing him and his kids playing in a large open field. They had so much fun together just running around and playing games.
He wants to go back to that wonderful time and do it all over again.
01:04-01:27
The flashback fades away and he sees that the guards are coming to his cell.
It's time for the weekly visits and his wife comes almost every week and sometimes she brings the children with her.
01:28-02:10
He walks with the guards to the meeting place. He really hopes that his wife brought the children with her.
He has been 4 years in prison now. He only has 6 months until his release, but he is scared. He is scared that things can never be the same again.
02:11-03:02
When he walks through the door he sees his wife and children. They hug eachother and sit down at a table.
He asks his children how things were at school.
When they all told what they did that week they are starting to talk about how things were. They are talking about the trips they went on and the funny things that they experienced together.
03:03-03:42
The bell rings. Visiting time is over and they kiss eachother goodbye.
Slowly he walks away, with a tear falling from his eye, but also with a smile on his face.

Zero123Music responds:

that story was beautiful
truly, thank you for the 10, the story and the compliments^^

>>Zero