Pretty nice...
But i don't really like the way you panned the violins to the left. They are pretty dominant in the beginning, so it would sound better if you pan them in the center.
Also, you could improve your dynamics. I'm not really good at dynamics, but i can tell you that dynamics are pretty important in Classical music. Well, that's my opinion :P
What i didn't like too, was that sudden stop at 02:38. After that stop it seems like another song begins to play.
After all this criticism you could get the impression that i don't like this piece of music, but that's not true.
I like your instrument choice and the melodies. This is actually pretty impressive, if you only write music for one year. You have so much time left to improve and become a really good composer.
I think you have the talent.
Keep it up!
MH16
PS: If you want that people check your other pieces too, please respond to the reviews you get.